This is a good first draft Hamda. Use some stills from the video to illustrate. You are strong on representations and themes, with some fairly detailed analysis of camera, editing and mise en scene. This could be expanded. You need to be clearer on the elements that inspire you with your own music video- specific techniques. Make these amendments and do two more case studies. Vanessa
You have made some improvements here but you are still rather vague on which elements inspire you for your own video. You need to add some stills to illustrate and add a 3rd case study. V
This is a good first draft Hamda. Use some stills from the video to illustrate. You are strong on representations and themes, with some fairly detailed analysis of camera, editing and mise en scene. This could be expanded. You need to be clearer on the elements that inspire you with your own music video- specific techniques. Make these amendments and do two more case studies. Vanessa
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