For our pitch feedback, the response was overall positive
because many of my peers liked the mock up however there are some things that
needs to be improved for example our headline was not bold enough for the
audience to see and understand what is typed therefore that needs to be
improved yet keeping the simplicity of it. The picture used for the mock up was
from location shot from our music video however we felt like it would be more
professional in using a studio shoot rather than a location shot as we asked
the audience how they felt about that and they agreed with it.
